tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448289495460606195.post8935774447617650955..comments2023-08-21T06:24:36.060-07:00Comments on Sean S- D: Final Street (with a few extras)Seanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08658218536645203947noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448289495460606195.post-51663092951387839602010-12-14T09:09:02.707-08:002010-12-14T09:09:02.707-08:00Interim Online Review 14/12/2010
Hey Sean - first...Interim Online Review 14/12/2010<br /><br />Hey Sean - firstly, congrats on finishing the Maya terrace. A labour of love + a bloody great spaceship...<br /><br />Okay - well, Alex is absolutely right, of course, in regard to your most recent thumbnail; humans are, indeed a no-no! You're simply not proficient enough yet to model human anatomy adequately - which is why, more stylised forms of the human body ARE included (mannequins/dolls) because the skillset is achievable.<br /><br />There's not a huge amount on here, Sean - (your reviews are a HUGE improvement - well done) - in regard to your conceptual development; you've identified an empty classroom and a train as potential environments, but there's not enough clarity of concept for me to give you a 'green light'. I suggest you do much more artist research and commit time to pushing this project along. You didn't attend your Unit 2 re-sub tutorial with me on Monday: I hope this means that you know exactly what you need to do in order to pass! Please get your unit 3 creative development updated as soon as possible - but, put simply, a trainful of identical twins is definitely a "no"!<br /><br />For guidance re. your unit 3 written assignment, follow the link:<br /><br />http://ucarochester-cgartsandanimation.blogspot.com/2010/12/fao-cgaa-year-1-unit-3environment-essay.htmltutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com